Hey, wow, this is great. Dawn is so real here, and so interesting, and I'm a sucker for Scooby portrayals outside the core four. I like the sparseness of the interactions, and the cleanness of the prose, and the dialogue is great. Plus the Sumerian passages completely fascinated this language geek.

Also...damn. I have complete appreciation for what you do now. And I thought Japanese was hard! *g*

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