I read this last night but was too tired to leave a coherent comment. Let's see if I can be coherent now! Answer: probably not.

Okay, I'll give it a try. Since I love UST more than porn even, I kind of want to marry this. This line especially really got to me: She kind of half waves and heads toward the mess tent for that coffee. The sun's rising behind her, so for a second she's just a silhouette and there's brightness all around her. He doesn't sleep for a long time, thinking about it. It's just so perfect in its simplicity.

Also, I can not believe you stuck them into this whole other kind of world and made it work. That's really incredibly impressive.